page 08 notes

In this page there is a major difference happening on the lettering.
on the original comic, panel 2 that features Mayor Appleton had the dialogue of President Grant “I’m afraid i don’t share your excitement, Mayor Appleton” .Here i changed that dialogue to be apart of panel 1. the idea behind it was that if offers a bigger impact after you reading that and go to panel 2 and get the Mayor’s reaction.

Hope you enjoyed this page and see you guys next week.